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A Poem For Potter By purple Nov 24, 2004 |
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Our tale began with a baby boy,
Black hair and bright green eyes;
Left on a doorstep, parents dead
In-laws did naught but keep him alive;
They tried to force his future out,
To make it go away,
But fortunately they did not succeed;
Their wishes did he betray.
They found him on the school's ceiling,
Hiding from the Head,
They blamed him for his cousin's trap,
And for how the snake had fled.
But one day post came pouring in,
At number four Privet Drive,
And though his guardians disagreed,
Soon at Hogwarts he did arrive.
He traveled there by scarlet train,
Breaking free from Dursley's hell,
And so happy he was that before he left,
That pig Dudley had a new tail.
He made two best friends on the way to school,
Though each was at first his stranger,
A red-haired boy called Weasley,
And the witty girl named Granger.
He felt there'd be no finer year,
But three stood poised to spoil;
Some evil lads from Slytherin,
Were Malfoy, Crabbe and Goyle.
He soon was learning weird subjects,
Like Potions and Transfiguration;
He also found himself in Charms
Practicing the art of levitation;
He searched and searched around the school,
To find a Basketball court;
But instead was picked a Seeker
For the wizarding Quidditch sport.
Now nearing the end of his first term,
His bravery brightly shone,
He fought off evil Lord Voldemort
To save the Philosopher's Stone!
As exam time came and went
He and Ron sought just to pass,
Hermione with all her intelligence
Expectedly topped the class.
And during Hogwarts' final feast,
Even though they'd given up,
The trio along with Neville's help
Had won Gryffindor the Cup!
In the end, he left the school
As days and nights grew hotter,
Forever changed, a scarred young wizard,
He's the famous Harry Potter.
COMMENTS (1451)
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bella eiram Witch  Joined: Jan 13, 2005 House: Gryffindor Points: 583 |
Very, very cute. Great rhyme. Flow could have been tweaked a bit, but it was still very, very good. Nice job, purple.
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honorcode Squib  Joined: Jan 24, 2005 House: Gryffindor Points: 173 |
Wickedly cool I never can rhyme so it amazes me when somebody can do such a great job.
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hprelic Prefect Joined: Oct 10, 2004 House: Gryffindor Points: 386 |
That's a great poem and summarization of the first book now we just need one for the next four books.
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AsiaLovesHP Order of Merlin, 4th Class  Joined: Dec 25, 2004 House: Gryffindor Points: 1266 |
WOW! Thats a great poem..Its definitely cute...
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dingbat1 Queen of Posts, H.W.C.  Joined: Nov 6, 2004 House: Gryffindor Points: 6780 |
Awwww! Now we need a summary for the other books. Good job!
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lamtweety Muggle  Joined: Jan 31, 2005 House: Gryffindor Points: 1 |
Wow! This poem is so amazing! I say that because i can't rhyme
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Branny Squib  Joined: Jul 23, 2004 House: Ravenclaw Points: 166 |
Absolutely wonderful! Couldn't have done it any better! Great job! I love it!
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bella eiram Witch Joined: Jan 13, 2005 House: Gryffindor Points: 583 |
lamtweety and honorcode--- welcome to the site
purple, again, nice poem and maybe you might think about working on one for the next book or something--- maybe someday get to the fifth book (my personal favourite :-D) Keep up the nice work. |
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caraMEL_penguin Witch  Joined: Jan 20, 2005 House: Gryffindor Points: 870 |
That was really cute!!! <3!!
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DaraDiana_Victoria Witch  Joined: Jan 12, 2005 House: Ravenclaw Points: 972 |
Nice poem, purple. now how about one for book 5?
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Lord Of The Cows Mad Cow Breeder Joined: Jun 8, 2004 House: Gryffindor Points: 8481 |
Wow.. NIce Job purple.. Always knew you where good at writing.. but that.. well WOW. Must have taken ages to get all that rhyming. GOOD JOB
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The Lime Muggle Representative  Joined: Dec 7, 2003 House: Hufflepuff Points: 9117 |
Thats Puprz! Nice job - i really really like it! No, i LOVE it! Congrats many times... You deserve the honor!
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Draco <3 Me Order of Merlin, 2nd Class  Joined: Jan 16, 2005 House: Gryffindor Points: 1685 |
Awwwww that absolutley ROCKED! I'm a bit ofa poet myself but i know when to be envious, this is one of those times! Well done purple!
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purple The Daily Prophet Poet  Joined: Jun 25, 2004 House: Gryffindor Points: 16170 |
Thanks Emil and Harry's Honey! I have written till book three (summary of them I mean) and i've written few more poems, so if you want to read them just email me to send you them:
purplemalik@hotmail.com |
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Veronica Smethley Cryptologist  Joined: Dec 28, 2004 House: Gryffindor Points: 3018 |
Hey purple! That is excellent! I loved it, and I also love the way you presented it!
You've become famous, wow!  |
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nymphadora84 Sirius' Princess  Joined: Feb 3, 2004 House: Gryffindor Points: 5611 |
Great poem Purpz....well done!!
Post your other ones too.....All the best! |
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purple The Daily Prophet Poet Joined: Jun 25, 2004 House: Gryffindor Points: 16170 |
Well, Bis, I can't really 'post' them on here. I need to send them to a moderator and then they decide whether it is good enough to be here or no =)
Kind of like a real magazine, hehe, it's cool though! Malaika, well, even I didn't know till today so I doubt about me becoming famous, oh well, let's give it a few more days and if by that time people are asking for my autograph, yep, i'm famous. Haha, just kidding. |
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Veronica Smethley Cryptologist Joined: Dec 28, 2004 House: Gryffindor Points: 3018 |
Sure enough, I think many more will love your poem ^_^
Well, why don't you send those poems you posted in "poet's corner" to the mods too, they are very good too, i'm sure they'll get published.... I wish i could also write such poems..... See ya |
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Champion Seeker The English Seeker  Joined: Aug 1, 2004 House: Gryffindor Points: 4915 |
Very cool Purple! Very cool! Keep up the great work!
:D |
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Another_Weasley Auror  Joined: Dec 28, 2004 House: Gryffindor Points: 2001 |
purple- As I've mentioned on another thread, you are a very talented writer. Are you working on poems for the rest of the books?
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dracoharryluv Professor  Joined: Jan 9, 2005 House: Slytherin Points: 1163 |
Very nicely done, Purple. I believe good writing pulls you along and makes you read what's next...this did that for me. I'm e-mailing you because I want to read the others.
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purple The Daily Prophet Poet Joined: Jun 25, 2004 House: Gryffindor Points: 16170 |
Thanks Joe and Malakia.
Another Weasley, which thread have you posted in? Anyway, yes, I've written till poem three and am currently working on poem four and then will start five. I've written many other HP poems though =) Thanks dracoharryluv - I'll mail you back in an hour or so because I have to go right now but will be back by then =) Updated Feb 2, 2005 at 12:16 PM by purple |
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feltonluver Professional Beater  Joined: Dec 8, 2003 House: Slytherin Points: 20891 |
AHH purple this poem is soo good! I love it! You should write another one for the Chamber of Secrets. Great job.
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Phil_ St. Mungo's Mental Patient  Joined: Mar 9, 2004 House: Gryffindor Points: 41829 |
Doesn't this poem completely rule, i fell in love with this poem the first time i read it...
You rule sis...!! |
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RogueRenegade Star-Crossed Lover  Joined: Sep 7, 2004 House: Gryffindor Points: 2928 |
Well congratulations Purple, that was way cool and fun to read. keep up the good work and dont get kicked by basketballs!
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